In year 5, we have been trying to improve the structure of our sentences using I.S.P.A.C.E
I - 'ing words
S - similes
P - prepositions
A - adverbs
C - conjunctions
E - 'ed words
Here are some examples from 5JH...
The rocky mountain is towering over the peaceful island.
The magnificent tropical island is sunny with burning bright white clouds.
The beautiful tropical sea is washing onto the island.
Can you suggest your own???